Form submission: Design Update Form

Ballator Plaque Link:: https://www.deviantart.com/ballatordesig...-728002641

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Updated Design Link:  https://sta.sh/0vrhc4po606

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Updates To Be Made:: Skin Changer

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Proof of Updates:: In Bank

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Hey there there is just a few corrections that need to be made before we can get this cutie uploaded!

• The lineart and the coloring of the horns is a little rough. We noticed that the lineart has dramatically different colors at some point like going from black to red. There is also many areas where the horn colors bleed outside of the lines or don't go all the way to the line. Please make it so the coloring fits inside of the lines completely.
  
• The Pronghorn oryx looks a little off for them. Here is the list of fixes that are needed:
  Looking at the oryx, the dark face marking does not match the headshot. 
  The second round ended stripe is not clear. It should come out farther and have a clear rounded shape
  The belly marking awkwardly has two humps. It should be one smooth curving shape. We also noticed not all of the belly is covered
  The upper knee marking on the front leg needs to be making a U shape.
  The light belly marking should go slightly onto the thigh of the back leg
  The rump light marking needs to be right on the back of the rump starting at the base of the tail
  Not sure where the white splotches are coming from at the bottom of the feet but those need to be removed.
  Here are some examples for you: ID 5549 and ID 7994
  

Please reply back when you have made the above changes! Feel free to reach out if you have any questions! <3

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Correction to the design must be completed by 6/13/2022. Please reply back to this thread when completed. Thank you!

Failure to reply by set date will result in this review being closed and you will have to resubmit.

Hey I'm so sorry for all the trouble! I attempted to correct everything with a track pad so I hope it looks better now and not so 'awkward'. 

https://sta.sh/0hb92ag3hq0

Thank you so much for your patience and effort, it is much appreciated <3 Here

They are looking much better! just a few more tiny things before they can be uploaded:

• The stomach marking still doesn't quite flow. I drew a line about how it should flow on the body here: https://gyazo.com/36c0d16ecaa8b838653c948defff023e
  You can bring the white marking a little more up before the manes, but ultimately it can't go from a much lower height to a much higher height from the shoulder to the barrel
  
• The horns and hooves still have some coloring outside/not within the lines. It might seem silly to correct these, but unfortunately, mistakes in coloring can cause a lot of confusion for people wondering whether it was a coloring mistake or a legitamate thing you could do. I have highlighted the areas below for you::
  Upper Headset: https://gyazo.com/192d98342bbfb874695b05d9bd1eab60
  Shoulder Horns: https://gyazo.com/8e76d79bf80b2cba7fa12534f0b42408
  Rump Horns: https://gyazo.com/d0b654752cf2b9de4233d76bfddafd97
  Back Left Foot: https://gyazo.com/733ba279375b37b2fc563b67b498e174
  

Please reply back to me once you have made the changes above! Thank you so much!

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Correction to the design must be completed by June 19th 2022. Please reply back to this thread when completed. Thank you!

Failure to reply by set date will result in this review being closed and you will have to resubmit.

First of all I want to say thank you so much for your patience and the visual guides really helped! Here is the newest version: https://sta.sh/01y0h7pqzw8z

This babe is perfect  now! They have been uploaded

1x skinchanger removed!